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Jumper Arachne (My custom MG)

Disposition: Friendly, teasing, playful.
Habitat: Nomadic
Diet: Meat, Semen.

Description: A type of arachne with a passion for music and its namesake to jump around hard-to-reach areas. They generally don‘t settle anywhere for long periods of time and always travel, seeking the world‘s wonders of music. When she spots a man that fancy her liking, she greets and invites him to see her dancing, doing some sidestepping while moving their arms in a fashion similar to that of a musical conductor putting men into a hypnotic trance. Once she has him entranced, she will pounce on him, forcing sexual intercourse until she’s satisfied or he passes out. Men who come across her are likely people with some form of musical talent or interest. Should the man she fancies attempts to leave her or strays to another mamono, she will not stop to find him and will put him in a permanent trance.
Also her eyes can change colour to indicating her covert emotions. If green, she’s happy, if blue, sad, if red, angry, and if a deep pink, in lustful heat.
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Oh, yes. I remember this one. It was good. I can appreciate the hand-drawing, dude. Keep being awesome.
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Ha, I remember this one awhile back, very nice Monster Girl and drawing it out makes it easier for someone to visualize what it looks like as well
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And so, she is remade again. (Reposted for relevance)
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Greetings

Nice! Now that you gave her a skin colour she looks cooler. Now to review
her profile after so much time...
Pierce wrote:
Jumper Arachnea.jpg
And so, she is remade again. (Reposted for relevance)
Men who come across her are likely people with some form of musical talent or interest. Should the man she fancies attempts to leave her or strays to another mamono, she will not stop to find him and will put him in a permanent trance.
Correct the writer of this if wrong, but does this mean that she will
"hypnotise" her love interest even if he was already engaged to another
female?

And isn´t the "permanent trance" just an euphemism for "brainwash"?
Also her eyes can change colour to indicating her covert emotions. If green, she’s happy, if blue, sad, if red, angry, and if a deep pink, in lustful heat.
It would be interesting if you could make an image depicting her in her various
possible moods, each of them reflected by her eye colouring...

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The trance sounds similar to how a cockatrice stops a man that leaves her. Probably some kind of temporary consciousness disabling technique until she recaptures him. I suppose she can dispel it as she pleases though.

I'm glad to see that my Alouette gets along with her so well. Hehe..
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Subliminal wrote: It would be interesting if you could make an image depicting her in her various possible moods, each of them reflected by her eye colouring...
And here you go Sub.
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The brown coloured one is something Pokemonaces requested.
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Greetings

Ok, let´s see....

Blue eyes = sad -->heartbroken.

Red eyes = angry --> learning she has been cheated.

Pink eyes = In love / lustful --> Yandere trance?

Brown eyes = Mischievous --> Takuki Mode ("Now that Alloutte is under my control I will be able to get Feathers soon hee hee hee hee")

///

In her angry mood, it can be noticed that you attempted to add some blush, but then you discarded it.
While the blush would have been suiting ( indeed one´s face becomes red when angry), perhaps
you tried to avoid a "tsundere" look, wasn´t it?

Also, thank you very much and very nice work.

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Subliminal wrote:Greetings

Ok, let´s see....

Blue eyes = sad -->heartbroken.

Red eyes = angry --> learning she has been cheated.

Pink eyes = In love / lustful --> Yandere trance?

Brown eyes = Mischievous --> Takuki Mode ("Now that Alloutte is under my control I will be able to get Feathers soon hee hee hee hee")
Blue: Correct.
Red: Correct.
Pink: Correct but yandere behaviour was intended for the Brown-eyes.
Brown Eyes: Good guess, but it's Yandere. (Was hoping the PokemonAces hint would give away his passion for the Yanderes)

In her angry mood, it can be noticed that you attempted to add some blush, but then you discarded it.
While the blush would have been suiting ( indeed one´s face becomes red when angry), perhaps
you tried to avoid a "tsundere" look, wasn´t it?
Excellent observation, almost as if you were watching me draw these pictures beside you. The reason I discarded her blush was because I thought it'd be too similar to the lustful expression despite eye colour distinguishing emotional reactions)

Also, thank you very much and very nice work.

Blessings.
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Liliana Si Morcia (Lilim-type Succubus)

Disposition: Friendly, Calm (Assertive in Inmate)
Habitat: The Demon Lord's Castle (Nomadic in Inmate)
Diet: Any edible food and drink. (Semen in Inmate)

IMPORTANT NOTE: It is not recommended to read description unless you read the fanfic "Inmate". As her description's a summarized spoiler to the fic. If you don't intend to read my fic, then feel free to read the description below.

Description: The thirteenth heir to the Demon Lord. Liliana had outright opposed her mother's system when she reached the age of reason. She believed the current system will cause the downfall of both species. One late night, she had an argument with her siblings, among them included the fourth daughter Dellera as she expressed concern with the current ethics of their mother's system. Frustrated at their stubborness and being harassed for being the only virgin sibling in the family, she left the castle to cool off only to find a wristwatch instead. Putting it on, it resulted in her being thrown 600 years into the future. When she came to, she attempted to find answers in her travels, only to be captured and subjected to interrogation by modernized order members in their secret facility, having her charm powers negated by emitters and her wings clipped to prevent escape.
She eventually befriended an ex-order member who shared similar goals but was branded a heretic by his own peers for his deviating opinions. Both eventually took each other's virginity out of desperation, using synergy by restoring her wings and powers from the fresh intake of raw spirit energy and worked together to escape the facility moments before its self detonation. Now both Liliana and her newly-incubus partner face a new conflict, the reverse monsterization of the monster girls in New Zipangu.

(Custom picture coming soon so I don't copycat the normal Lilim, just need to adjust her hairstyle and clothing)
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Scarlette (Succubus family, Demon Type)

Habitat: Casino
Disposition: Lustful, Cheerful, Gentle.
Diet: Normal Food, Semen.

Description:
Scarlette was a young succubus, who had been born on the overhead catwalks inside a casino premise by a local worker, who had given birth to her one night during her sentry duties. Horrified at the offspring's demon-like features, her mother had left her behind and quitting her job, never to see her own daughter again out of fear. Scarlette on the other hand didn't express sadness, but was instead distracted, watching the casino floor as she saw the endless amounts of people entering and exiting, winning and throwing away money, getting drunk, and on occasion, watch concerts play in the other side of the premises (Catwalks extend to the concert as well).

She even managed to vocalize and learn how to speak english from observing the gamblers speak. Years passed as she came to learn how to play table games, watching people play at a distance. One table game that caught her eye was a roulette table, to which she heard one of the gamblers nickname "The Devil's Game." for the numbers 1 to 36 added together equalled 666. As her body developed into that of a teen, she started to grow hungry, having not felt this sensation before as she started to grow desperate to quell said hunger.

One night later, she snuck into a kitchen and had a taste of mashed potatoes and sliced chicken breasts for the first time as one person noticed her presence, the head manager of the casino. Before he could scream for help, noticing her succubus-like features. Her eyes glowed red, hypnotizing him as he yielded to her commands. He ended up granting her a job, giving her access to the casino floor and not having to wear any standard uniforms all other workers had to wear. So she picked a roulette table and began working feverishly. The head manager then started to call her Scarlette, noticing her blood red hair and eyes as she replied happily, accepting her new name bestowed upon her.

When on the job, Scarlette attracts a large group of male customers, who seemingly feels more than willing to bet on her table without question, just to gaze at her visage. Only to end up losing a tonload of money in favour of the house by the time their hypnosis wears off. Those who lose don't catch much of Scarlette's attention as she tells them to "Please come again".

Those who actually win money off her table sparks a burning desire of interest from her. As when she's off duty, she follows the winner home and proceeds to seduce him with her charms and linguistics in an element of surprise as most men will likely accept, giving into the pleasure. When they wake up, they turn to find Scarlette gone, but instead finding a young baby that resembles herself that will immediately recognize her father as a companion. The father in turn will most raise the offspring until they mature as when they do, they will bring luck and wealth to him and her future generations. So those who win from Scarlette's table will get more than what they bargain for.
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Re: Pierce's Custom MGs (Various Expressions)

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Pierce wrote:
Subliminal wrote: It would be interesting if you could make an image depicting her in her various possible moods, each of them reflected by her eye colouring...
And here you go Sub.
Jumper Arachne's expressionsa.jpg
The brown coloured one is something Pokemonaces requested.
...you know what, Pierce-kun? My 1st fanfic attempt, way back then, had a character with THIS quality. A girl with eyes that changed color, though, in my story, the changes were only noticable to those who were used to her.

Even if I didn't plan to use all colors' spectrum, I'd say that my choice was...
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Green - Amorous
Pink - Hyperactive
Red - Shy
White - Puzzled
Dark Red - Sadistic
Orange - Sad
Purple - Normal
I'm sorry for not seeing your profile here until now, but now that I read it, I liked to see someone else having the idea.
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Basilisk (Minor Lizardman variant)

Disposition: Calm, Timid, Competitive.
Habitat: Lakes, Ponds.
Diet: Insects, Berries.

Description: A slight variant to the Lizardman, in that her feature involves being capable of running on water to assist.
Unlike the Lizardman, who's habitat resides in caves, the Basilisk enjoys most of their time swimming in lakes and large ponds.
However, like the Lizardman, she will spar with a male traveller who takes up their offer to battle, and will offer their hand in marriage if they are defeated. They still will likely stalk their prey if turned down. Should the man attempt to evade on boat, the Basilisk will employ her tail and retractable webbed feet as a method to quickly run on water. Most likely to the surprise of the unwary fleer.

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(No petrifying gaze for the Basilisk? Surprised. )

Are you going to make the profile any longer? What kind of weapons does she use? A sword? What happens if the man loses?
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Feathers wrote:(No petrifying gaze for the Basilisk? Surprised. )

Are you going to make the profile any longer? What kind of weapons does she use? A sword? What happens if the man loses?
My version of the basilisk is more based on this critter, not the mythical version.
and yeah, work in progress, though she is more loosely based on the lizardman, I intend to modify her features to make her more unique.

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Honey Badger

Habitat: Forests, Small Villages
Disposition: Selfish, Stubborn, Tsundere, Ferocious.
Diet: Meat

Description:

The Honey Badger is a self-conceited creature of its own right, simply thinking for themselves without regard or care of others, be it human or monster. They generally show a rude and tough personality towards anyone they're not familar with and if she sees something of desire, she will use any and all methods to attain and acquire her object of interest.

Because of her namesake, the Honey Badger will forcibly break into large beehives just to consume honey and its larvae, despite the fierce protest and opposition of the Honeybees who attempt to sting the fearless intruder. The Honey badger's body skin is well protected and flexible to twist and turn on their attackers whenever grappled, even managing to withstand a number of sword strikes.

When living near a settlement, Honey Badgers will occasionally break into small animal farms to consume small animals such as poultry to feed, so chicken farmers must take extra caution when detecting her presence. They also do not respect nor care of the nature of a monogamous relationships of other men being partnered with other monsters. If said man strikes her fancy, she will not hesistate and will immediately approach and snatch him away from his partner, taking him deep into the forests where she will forcibly copulate with her catch, Occasionally throwing insults and riding her partner rough as her flexible body will provide sudden pleasure to the man. Even if her prey resists despite that, she simply doesn't care of his cries for help as she simply laughs at him.

Honey Badgers are usually not so committed to a partner as opposed to many of the creatures. When they finish copulation, they leave the man behind and move onto another continuing the vicious cycle. Taming one is extremely difficult as they are very independent and ferocious in nature, however if one manages to tame her, she will treat him like herself, fetching and providing sustenance to him.

(Dunno how to depict her though, might give her a human torso and head with Honey badger limbs (Ala Anubis/Werewolf)
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She's definitely a TRUE villainess. :@_@: Nice work portraying her as such.
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Jumper is pretty cute! I really like her personality and appearance, and Basilisk seems really cool too!
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Electric Eel

Habitat: Oceans
Disposition: Shy, Aggressive, Gentle
Diet: Fish

Description: Electric Eels are underwater serpents who roam the endless sea of water. They are known specifically for their ability to exude electricity from their bodies, used generally to catch prey or in self defence.

Almost all men who are within their sights are either fishermen or boaters. Upon seeing one, the Eel would slowly approach him until being close enough to stun him lightly with her electricity, just enough to temporarily paralyze her prey before mating.

When undressing her prey, she would stimulate her partner electrically through mild voltage from any and every part of her body to enhance and arouse his bodily sensations. Most especially through kissing, handjobs, blowjobs and sexual intercourse.
During vaginal penetration, every moving thrust ranges from moderate to strong sensations of electric pulses (But not high enough to cause fibrillation), ensuring her partner remains hard throughout the session. Even impotent men are able to satisfy her without trouble beginning, during or after sex.

For non sexual recreational purposes, Eels can utilize their electricity to produce light shows, massaging, powering up machines that require electricity for emergencies and to deep fry fish if the mood suits her.
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Being a victim (voluntary participant) of an electrical nerve test exam (for carpal tunnel), I can say that the sensation of electricity surging through even small parts of the body is quite painful, even in small amounts. X_X Just imagine a simple static discharge shock after walking on the carpet..

In my own personal opinion, I can't find this monster girl to be very pleasant myself in any situation..but I will assume that masochists would probably LOVE her. ^^; She's definitely not for me, as I can't STAND the thought of being 100% paralyzed. Being raped while PARALYZED is a nightmarish thought in itself. O_O

Also, how is she gentle and aggressive? She shocks men as soon as she seems them and then rapes them, I can't see her as gentle myself. She also greedily manipulates his body to her own liking, which seems to be more of a domination trait than a gentle trait.

Overall she is PERFECT for masochists though. :goodjob:
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