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Nagisa, the Wandering Nureonago

Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2015 11:54 pm
by Pokemonaces
Hey Guys. I haven't done a fic in awhile. So I decide to type one progressively each time I got to work early. So here's what I got.

If you guys know me well, a lot of my fics are lovey dovey and crap, so I hope it doesn't gross out some of you guys out there who aren'ty into mushy crap. Anyways here you are.

Oh and if I have spelling or grammar errors, please let me know :goodjob:
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Re: Nagisa, the Wandering Nureonago

Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2015 2:22 am
by Raet
This was pretty good, the strange rainy weather made me think of Redeeming a Shattered Dream where it had been raining for weeks in Zipangu. My only real concern was Nagisa, she didn't seem very Zipanguese, but then again, you did mention she travelled across the world so maybe.. Otherwise an enjoyable read with only minor errors.