One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

Post by Hood »

Yes, we need Lilith to get preg...I mean, to kick the old Demon Lord's ass as soon as possible
There are those who would scorn good-natured people. Even if God himself will
not show his face, a heartful person will one day take God's place in
visiting Judgement upon them. This is what is known as "Divine Retribution"
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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Chapter 162 up!

READ THE CHAPTER BEFORE READING THESE SPOILERS
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Yeah, Mist is supposed to be an incredibly haughty, arrogant, prideful, selfish, stuck up bitch that is also a devoted mother, a bit of an overprotective parent, and very much a Mama Bear. Fuck with her kids only if you want a Darwin Award.
I felt more like writing the next chapter than writing the next section of my world/setting, so... yeah. I'll probably write another chapter before returning to the world/setting.
From the hate-scorched sky!
With righteous anger in our hearts!
We draw forth the sword that smites evil!
Thou art the innocent blade----Demonbane!

Lemuria Impact:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtkCGQ9aTIc

Lemuria Impact translation:
"In this World of Light, there is no place for you of the Darkness!
Thirst not! Hunger not! Return to the Void!
Lemuria Impact!"

"Sublimate!"
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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You mess with anyone's kids, lets see if you can get out in one piece. Good stuff and I hope Mist gets her relief soon.
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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Holy motherfucking shit!!! I fell in love with that wom...eerh... dragon!!! Overprotective Mama Bear Red Dragon, I fucking approve that!!! Go Mist, Go!!!! Also... I seriously believe the guys are about to put Sol in a very "hot" situation. Hope he can handle this lizard ;) (Polymorph spell, here we go!!! :goodjob: )
Way to go Shadow Of Legend, I wanna see more of Mist!!! and...

When an Human Woman is confronted with motherhood, she usually has two choices:
1.- She could accept the baby and her fate to stay in the kitchen.
2.- She can keep her status by losing her baby through the wonders of abortion, a convenient miscarriage, giving it up for adoption if it gets born or simply rejecting the poor inocent creature if he/she is not really hers.

A Monster Mom says Fuck!!! to that in so many levels and chooses to take THE Third Option:
She keeps her role as great warrior/sorceress and slayer of evil minions/motherfuckers (a.k.a. the Order or the Villain of the week) while raising her children, whether said children are they're own monster or human kids or even adopted.

Even a calm and nursing Holstie will recall her Minotaurus (Hell, she may even go back all the way to the Cretaceous and recall a Triceratops) ancestry if you threaten her kids. May Heavens have mercy of your pathetic soul if you dare to mess with a Monster mom's babies. Monster Moms are real Badass Mothers.
There are those who would scorn good-natured people. Even if God himself will
not show his face, a heartful person will one day take God's place in
visiting Judgement upon them. This is what is known as "Divine Retribution"
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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Chapter 163 up! All I can say is that there will be a bit of a twist in the next chapter, but it might not be what you think. Also, I was delayed in writing this because I tend to not be able to concentrate enough to write a story when I'm on the phone, and when I'm forced to spend all day on the phone, well... You get the idea.
From the hate-scorched sky!
With righteous anger in our hearts!
We draw forth the sword that smites evil!
Thou art the innocent blade----Demonbane!

Lemuria Impact:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtkCGQ9aTIc

Lemuria Impact translation:
"In this World of Light, there is no place for you of the Darkness!
Thirst not! Hunger not! Return to the Void!
Lemuria Impact!"

"Sublimate!"
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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Lets hear it for Sol one of the greatest perverts of the world, He WILL satisfy Mist and the gang will collect on that bet. That's all I'm going to say.
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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I smell mindbroken red dragon milf :twisted:
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Knowing Sol he will probably be too much for her, i can't wait to see what happens.
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Nor will we obey your rules, and do things your way.

We we will fight for our cause, and die for it with no regrets.

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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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Chapter 164 up! The next chapter may answer any questions you might have pertaining to what happened between Sol and Mist, but for now? You get a peek at Mist's soft side.
From the hate-scorched sky!
With righteous anger in our hearts!
We draw forth the sword that smites evil!
Thou art the innocent blade----Demonbane!

Lemuria Impact:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtkCGQ9aTIc

Lemuria Impact translation:
"In this World of Light, there is no place for you of the Darkness!
Thirst not! Hunger not! Return to the Void!
Lemuria Impact!"

"Sublimate!"
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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How...could...you... :cry:
I wanted to see Mist's new "default form"
There are those who would scorn good-natured people. Even if God himself will
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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Hood wrote:How...could...you... :cry:
You mean the cliffhanger ending to this chapter?

Hood wrote:I wanted to see Mist's new "default form"
You will in the next chapter.
From the hate-scorched sky!
With righteous anger in our hearts!
We draw forth the sword that smites evil!
Thou art the innocent blade----Demonbane!

Lemuria Impact:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtkCGQ9aTIc

Lemuria Impact translation:
"In this World of Light, there is no place for you of the Darkness!
Thirst not! Hunger not! Return to the Void!
Lemuria Impact!"

"Sublimate!"
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I knew I was right in my last post, Sol can and will satisfy Mist, He is still one of the greatest perverts of legend. can't wait to see the next chapter.
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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Sol, the Rocco of Epic Fanatsy :hero:
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Asking in both places:

Who is this "Rocco"?
From the hate-scorched sky!
With righteous anger in our hearts!
We draw forth the sword that smites evil!
Thou art the innocent blade----Demonbane!

Lemuria Impact:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtkCGQ9aTIc

Lemuria Impact translation:
"In this World of Light, there is no place for you of the Darkness!
Thirst not! Hunger not! Return to the Void!
Lemuria Impact!"

"Sublimate!"
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There are those who would scorn good-natured people. Even if God himself will
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Chapter 165 up! The "Mist's introduction arc" is almost done. Afterwards, I'll have to write the next section in my setting, specifically the "Important people/beings/factions" section.
From the hate-scorched sky!
With righteous anger in our hearts!
We draw forth the sword that smites evil!
Thou art the innocent blade----Demonbane!

Lemuria Impact:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtkCGQ9aTIc

Lemuria Impact translation:
"In this World of Light, there is no place for you of the Darkness!
Thirst not! Hunger not! Return to the Void!
Lemuria Impact!"

"Sublimate!"
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Chapter 166 up! This chapter's quality may have suffered due to excessive interruptions by way of phone calls today, but I hope that isn't the case.

Anyway, yeah, this is the last we'll see of Mist for a while. She's got stuff to work out on her own, and our heroes need to move on.

By the way, for reference, Victoria and Hilda are both about 5'8", Lilith is 5'10", Lucas and Sol are 5'11", Zeraine and Amarantha are about 6'0", with Zeraine being just a tiny bit taller than Amarantha, and Mist is 6'2" in her human and polymorphed forms (obviously not counting her horns in the polymorphed form).
From the hate-scorched sky!
With righteous anger in our hearts!
We draw forth the sword that smites evil!
Thou art the innocent blade----Demonbane!

Lemuria Impact:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtkCGQ9aTIc

Lemuria Impact translation:
"In this World of Light, there is no place for you of the Darkness!
Thirst not! Hunger not! Return to the Void!
Lemuria Impact!"

"Sublimate!"
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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Well it's been a while since I have read this but I must say... so awesome :D. I guess now that they are in the demon realm things are going to get serious. Also mithril mines? sounds like someones been playing Oblivion... or Skyrim or Morrowind or maybe even Daggerfall. All the same good to see your still writing new chapters and I look forward to the next one :).
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Katsoro wrote:Well it's been a while since I have read this but I must say... so awesome :D. I guess now that they are in the demon realm things are going to get serious. Also mithril mines? sounds like someones been playing Oblivion... or Skyrim or Morrowind or maybe even Daggerfall. All the same good to see your still writing new chapters and I look forward to the next one :).

:sigh: I was going to reply to this when I posted the next chapter, but then I wound up getting two or three different ideas on how to write it and I haven't been able to decide which to go with. Anyway, I've played all four of those. 8-)
From the hate-scorched sky!
With righteous anger in our hearts!
We draw forth the sword that smites evil!
Thou art the innocent blade----Demonbane!

Lemuria Impact:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtkCGQ9aTIc

Lemuria Impact translation:
"In this World of Light, there is no place for you of the Darkness!
Thirst not! Hunger not! Return to the Void!
Lemuria Impact!"

"Sublimate!"
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Lucky bas- I have Skyrim but can't play it because my laptop is not meant for gaming :nono: (Az lest I have chicken Oblivion). Never played Morrowind or Daggerfall but seeing as Daggerfall can be downloaded for free that could change. Anyway good luck on the next chapter :cheer2: :Whoo!: :cheer2: .
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